All Comments on 'Touched by a Rose'

the tease of cold steel tracing along warm skin, danger just a breath away.... mmmmm

i want a master with a knife like that...wow

This was a good story :) I only have one thing to say for future improvement. When writing a Gorean story, most would use the term "Yielding" instead of Cumming. You may know this already and simply prefer not to use the term which is fine, I just thought I would let you know just in case. :)

Best wishes,

~ slave ana