by Cat_Daddy
Nice work! Moved smoothly with the reason for her trusting him that much, left to the readers imagination. Perpetrates the mystique of women.
Nice. However he should have shown her the shower first thing, thrown her wet clothes in the dryer, then they could have chatted while she was wrapped in the towel until her clothes were dry. Called the tow truck then drove her to her car. That’s what should have happened. But then where’s the story in that?
Have you invited any of the girls back. I'm sure there's a pool or a nicely cooked dinner. I did enjoy the take charge position he had taken.