All Comments on 'Town & County Confidential Ch. 01'

Wish I could say “why” but I can not.

This writing is one of the best from the entire series: passion, insights, no overly done descriptions, easily read as stand alone and as part of the series, some suggestions of good humor, plot tension, etc. and etc..

Thank you.

Craig

Great story to this point with an extra dose of hatred for the FEDS. It has most of your trademark suspense with numerous clues left behind. So does the IC save the women from a certain death sentence or someone else?

One of the comments is not showing up. I can go into my dashboard and read it, but I can't make it appear here. Putting a title on your comments should work to make sure the comment contents show up. Thanks.

From my iPhone screen, there is no place for a title. Perhaps that comment you reference also came from a mobile device with no option for a title?

Craig

The next chapter of the story has been submitted and hopefully will be published soon.

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Here we go again with another nail biter. Great work as usual cant wait for the next installment.

Neither my PC nor my Android " Comment " section . Provide the option for a title . As I would if I could . This case is hitting close to home . As you mentioned the immigrants came through my State . And is a hot spot for all immigrants for whatever they are seeking . Unfortunately this treacherous and physically dangerous border has proven unmanageable by all parties tasked with its control . It is not as simple as just saying " Get it done . " And remains an international nightmare . Hope you post my comment as it has no political agenda . But I fear for the lives of those women . Hope you can save them . And have the opportunity of asylum .

Another winner to me. I love the use of imagery in this Spillane inspired piece!

Literotica seem to be holding part 2 back. Other stories have had back to back chapters published... What are they doing?

I’m not sure why there is a delay in Chapter 2 being published. We’ll see if it’s published tomorrow (Monday).

Well the story, the plot is good, but it reads like a screenplay. Too many details about the scene. I suggest the author keep two versions one for readers and one for Hollywood.

Chapter 2 has not posted yet. I presume your change in writing style is due to the "Hammered-Ode to Mickey Spillane" contest? Not bad compared to other competitors. Under the new format on Lit you cannot add a title. Oh, also, great story. So far...........

The second chapter should be published tomorrow (Tuesday, 9/28), Lord willin' and the Creek don't rise. And I understand about titles to comments; we'll drive on with what we've got.

teedeedub - yes, because this is part of the Spillane challenge, I've essentially re-introduced the characters, so that new readers get an idea of who they are.. And of course I've added the 'Russ Ferrament' quotations. I really wish this challenge had been going on when 'Film Noir' was published; that would've been my true ode to Mickey Spillane. I'd been considering another Russ Ferrament story, and this challenge provided the opportunity.

pk2curious - I wasn't intending to touch the immigration issue, as this is more a drug and prostitution story and the dirty cops and agents that accompany those vices. You may also have noticed that I've really toned down the politics in this story, as well...

the corruption finally rots those causing the uproar. TK U MLJ LV NV

Judge Nance needs to go away.

Shouldn't say this really but it's about time Nance had a serious accident involving a bole in the head.

*****Good opening chapter.