All Comments on 'Toy For the Night'

by TwoStepImprov

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InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaosabout 3 years ago

I hope he left her ass after he and friends forcefully tortured her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a shitty story, he should have punched and mauled all four of those cunts !

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohio8 months ago

Mixed feelings about this one. Drugging and torturing him with serious pain, suffocation (as bad as water boarding), and the like, with no indication that he was masochistic, and no safe word — all pretty bad. I don’t think the sex afterwords would make up for it. Also, women easily become jealous. I can’t see Ali sharing him as described if she really loves him. Even with all the sex, I can’t imagine ever trusting these women again. Some of what they were doing was dangerous. What if he arrested (stopped breathing, or his heart stopped), then it wouldn’t be so much fun anymore, now would it? Also, any eroticism was outweighed by the painful torture. Three stars are all I can give. I don’t recommend a sequel unless it’s by someone like “Finish the Damn Story.” Too bad those authors aren’t around anymore.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Abuse. Not very erotic. What is erotic is seduction. One, he could have volunteered.

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