All Comments on 'Tracey's First Lover'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
loved it

keep writing. my wife has had a few lovers over the years, and it turns me on immensely

LEATBTLEATBTabout 17 years ago
Dangerous

Loved the start, but if this is a true acount,and you want to see your wife with another man, find a different one, this bloke's a big risk to your future!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
You are either retarted brain dead or the dumbest

male on the face of the planet. You are going to loose your wife and your kids and you think it's fun watching a man who your wife likes better than you fuck her. What an asshole

BarnoBarnoabout 17 years ago
Nice Story

Well written. I wonder if you will let your women see other men as well?

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersabout 17 years ago
Have you noticed?

Good story, and certainly illustrates the risk one takes when they share their partner's affections with another. This one worked out OK, but in real life, that's often not the case. As a side note, have you ever noticed that the nastiest comments are usually made by the most illiterate of the group? I assume that there's a connection.

BazzzBazzzabout 17 years ago
Okay story

I hope you let your woman see some more men. You seem open to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
get a clue!

these stories are fiction and fantasy!! you people all assume they are true

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More Wimpy Husband Fare

<p>But this isn't even marginally well written. Pass it by.</p>

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Alvaron53Alvaron53about 17 years ago
Painfully bad

<I>There was always an element of competition between us males as to how much we could service Tracey between us.</I>

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In the annals of the galactically stupid, this takes first prize.

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The title seems a bit odd, don't you think? <B>Tracey's First Lover</B> implies that her wimp of a husband didn't love her. Hmmmm. I guess that could be so.

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In conclusion, I have a request. Your writing is awful so please, never write anything again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
How Sweet - Pimping Out The Mother of Your(?) Kids

Also swell that you thought this pathetic self cuckolding was worth your time and interesting to anyone who was a real man.<P>

Realize that the Bazzster wants every man to pimp out their wife as it makes him feel better that there are other braindead jaded idiots like him.<P>

Writing like this for the very few other pitiful sick males into watching other cocks take their whore to places they never will tells us a lot about what excites you. Petty sad commentary of your mind it seems but certainly your right to feel as humiliated and freaky sub as you wish. Good luck with your life as you suffer through the lows you need.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I wish I had read the comments first

And these two had kids on top of all this, what a story, it sucks in all ways

TornadoTysTornadoTysover 9 years ago
Why......

What us the moral of this story to let a man fuck your wife who has fallen in love with her, wants her, secretly meets her, ğets jealous of the husband. Then after some years apart the husband wants them to get back together so he can film them having sex !

Is the husband's character a self destructive native on how to kill a marriage with a secretive wife !

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I get a huge laugh at the loser husbands who encourage their wives to be sluts and then become the third wheel, the second choice

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