All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

They are the most compatible pair on this site. You are tweaking all the "nipples" they have. You have to get her to smoke some crack/horse, put on a streetwalker outfit, wear slutty makeup, and do a trick for him...while smoking a nasty hooker brown cigarillo, of course. She says she has a deep iceberg...hooking is in her past. 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great stuff but still lots to experience.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Discovering someone's submissive side is one of the ultimate pleasures. It really does take a arousing progression. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This chapter is excellent, except for the fact that the love scenes are much too short, and almost seem to be rushed.

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingabout 1 year agoAuthor

It's a fair point, this most recent comment. At this earlier stage in the series, the chapters were almost more like vignettes!

StripClubAdventuresStripClubAdventuresabout 2 months ago

Love this story, really taking it to the next level with Kat and the relationship. Loved the beginning of the story where you casually had her drink the cum from a champagne glass. Great character development, hearing about the debauchery from the past is great. And the public sex is great!

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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