All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Ramping up! 5 Stars!! go get her!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Great Build Up

Great lead in and build up to what we hope is another outstanding story. Good teaser. More!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Kat should go further down. Perhaps a change of stimulant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The writer should know that drinking champagne in flight (high altitude) is a very bad idea and three bottles on two persons simply idiotic! The gas in the champagne does hurt the bloodstream/head badly and would cause a hangover like never before.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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