All Comments on 'Traffic Girl Ch. 32'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know this was an introduction to Jess, but given the hotness with which you write, I missed all the Hedonism. Don't go lame on us, we could care less that Jess has a problem controlling herself. John has to bring her back into the partying world. I will rate this 5 Stars for the introduction, but let the descent of Jess begin!!!

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingover 2 years agoAuthor

Do we really think Jess can control herself? :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Careful. Starting to border on the stupid.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I don't believe a woman like that had been celibate for an entire year. That in combination with their history could only lead to an unparalleled disaster!

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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