All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Highway to Hell? Ch. 01'

AH! Nice...breaking right out of the loop! Escalating to the next level....5 Stars!

Wow!!! This is like being a passenger on a motorcycle going along at 50 mph; then the driver cranks it up to 300 mph! Terrifying; and it leaves one all the more eager to see what happens next. Sharp turns ahead!

And I love the way the author conveys tons of information in just a few sentences. Great writing.

My only complaint is that so much time elapses between chapters. I find myself continually wanting to know what happens next.

Very Hot..I love it. Kat needs tats, nipple rings and a boob job that makes her look like Nicolette Shea....and her lips should be cock-sucker lips....

Once Kat gets the boob job, etc., I think she will be beyond redemption; and she can forget the idea of having a baby. On the other hand, Kat is tough and smart. John, on the other hand needs to do some serious thinking.

Jess’s chances of total self-destruction are extremely high; and she makes very poor girlfriend material, except for a man of enormous size and charisma.

Fascinating story and characters. I’m rooting for a happy ending for all three.

Please make sure to take this group to the land of Living easy and Loving free. They are on a one way ride to nothing and Taking the stride to that Going down to Party time. And their friends are gonna be there too. And they have No stop signs, no Speed limit an Nobody's gonna slow them down. As they say this group will say “Hey satan Payin' my due, Playin' in a rockin' band, Hey mumma, Look at me I'm on the way to the promised land. They are on the Highway to Hell. So Don't stop them.” All the way,!!!!! They are going down!!!!! Thanks for your great storytelling and wonderful characters your fans love your story. Thanks and Cheers My Friend

Cocaïne is the magic remedy for everything of course?!? Lie upon lie again, I get the idea none of them knows what the word love actually means. Jess wants to make Kat more like herself, John is stupid enough to let her. How can this ever have happy ending, no way in hell!

Hmmmmmmm, it’s a real shame that Kat has changed so much and that John is oblivious to what Jess is doing to them both