All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Rita Ch. 57'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very Nice! The first day of the rest of their lives!! With sexy cigarettes!!! Thanks!!!!..5 Stars

Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Fantastic Four

That was a fun and very climactic chapter. Very well done and showed the friendship and respect that each of the main four have for each other and their group as a whole. So five stars for how well it was all pulled together to be both romantic and sex fueled. The story has developed into one that is always growing and changing and has both Debauchery and relationships. Just an entertaining and enjoyable read. Some many different directions it can head to at the same time. Just a fun sexual adventures. Thanks for writing and publishing. Cheers

MysticMysteryMysticMysteryalmost 2 years ago

Awesome chapter, I've waited a long time fore these four to come together as one. Nicely done. Oh and French cigarettes to replace coke, nice!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

It's nice to think that this will last forever, it won't. Jess isn't the type to have has a girlfriend especially not a wife and a baby with her would be absolutely insane and make this story a travesty. She should just be a businesspartner and/or a fuckbuddy. Although she will fuck that up too eventually, it's simply in her DNA. Kat's love is real but her scratch will lead undoubtedly to screw around as well. Rita seems likes the most stable of the women and I don't see her ever breaking John's trust.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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