All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Rita Ch. 74'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Makes me think of that tv show. John, you are not the father! Ha ha.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I always enjoy the dialogue between the four, especially. Here, it’s outstanding!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope that the baby is a different ethnicity than John is. That would be a great twist and drama.

What about Rita looking in the medicine cabinet and frowning? What’s that about? The group can’t get too settled or happy and contented, the drama must continue.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I don't think John has had enough fun with Alix.

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After years of lurking and reading, I'm taking the writing plunge. I'm always open to constructive criticism and feedback. Please enjoy! A reader asked a good question: What's the proper order of the books? For the Traffic Girl series, which is best read in chronological orde...

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