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by OddityGreyEyes

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MiseryRubyMiseryRubyabout 12 years ago
???????

When I saw your writer's comment I thought, great, the spelling will be awful, the grammar even worse and the story would make no sense. SURPRISE. This was a very well written piece, I didn't pick up any mistakes what so ever, smooth reading, start to finish. 5 stars.

npiccininpicciniabout 12 years ago
Agree

I agree with the previous comment, because of your comment I didn't have high hopes for this story either but what a surprise! Very well written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

HistoricalpassionHistoricalpassionabout 12 years ago
:o not bad.

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Left me wanting . . .

Well written and left me wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More!

Please write more!

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userOddityGreyEyes@OddityGreyEyes
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Amateur writer, amateur at life in general, I don't tend to finish things, or if I do, it takes a long time.. Nicknamed kitty, as I'm told I act more like a cat than a human. I'm sceptical.. >.>' Any feedback on my work is highly appreciated as I'd like to improve.