by OddityGreyEyes
I agree with the previous comment, because of your comment I didn't have high hopes for this story either but what a surprise! Very well written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
When I saw your writer's comment I thought, great, the spelling will be awful, the grammar even worse and the story would make no sense. SURPRISE. This was a very well written piece, I didn't pick up any mistakes what so ever, smooth reading, start to finish. 5 stars.