All Comments on 'Train Trip Surprise'

by JBradford

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cmj711cmj7117 months ago

I appreciate your efforts, but you crammed too much in this story.

No man recovers that fast, twice.

HardfordiverseHardfordiverse7 months ago

I liked this story ! I always had a fantasy of fucking on a train- I managed it once- but not in the toilet, in an empty 6 bunk sleeper carriage during the day on a slow train to Shanghai-

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A writer for pleasure for many years. I have decided to take the plunge and share some of my writing. Please be honest, but kind.