All Comments on 'Training'

...that 'fsub' means 'female is submissive', and that 'mdom' means 'male is dominant'.

While your story has one 'fsub' mentioned, the main character is 'fdom' [female dominant], and the dominant's main subject is male [= msub or male submissive].

Correcting your tags is in order.

1* for inaccurate tags.

... but it seems more like a fragment than a finished piece. I agree with the other Anonymous, by the way, over your terminology, but that is a relatively minor thing to amend. Will there be a second chapter? It seems to be crying out for one. Four stars.

Hi thanks for the comments. I am planning on making another chapter, I just wanted to get my feet wet and see what Literotica is like. Oh and I am relatively new to BDSM that’s why my tags aren’t up to snuff.

Thanks again,

MIM :3