by MindInMyth
Hi thanks for the comments. I am planning on making another chapter, I just wanted to get my feet wet and see what Literotica is like. Oh and I am relatively new to BDSM that’s why my tags aren’t up to snuff.
Thanks again,
MIM :3
... but it seems more like a fragment than a finished piece. I agree with the other Anonymous, by the way, over your terminology, but that is a relatively minor thing to amend. Will there be a second chapter? It seems to be crying out for one. Four stars.
...that 'fsub' means 'female is submissive', and that 'mdom' means 'male is dominant'.
While your story has one 'fsub' mentioned, the main character is 'fdom' [female dominant], and the dominant's main subject is male [= msub or male submissive].
Correcting your tags is in order.
1* for inaccurate tags.