All Comments on 'Transformations - Sinful Suburbia Ch. 04'

I really like whats happening with tyler. Of course the police are no match for Stacie, but some kind of ending is coming. I always thought tyler would be converted as like a sister slave with emily but looks like thats not the case. The schism in the church keeps looming. Im guessing all the characters will be involved when that finaly kicks off. Great writing! Thanks for posting it!

Somewhere down the line Margaret should run into Abe's ex-wife and seduce her. Turn her into a girl loving hooker who can only get off with Margaret. Abe and Melissa ought to come together and..... whatever. Emily and Tyler should be given special hormones and DNA and set up to create special babies for the church. Just my thoughts. I'm sure y'all are way ahead of anything I might think of. It's a great story so far.

Great story as usual. We had an Amber before didn't we? Is this the same Amber or a different one? Keep them up you nasty ppl! ;)

Levi is going to the religious caste.

I have no idea what Emily is thinking. They made her a she-male when her clit gets sucked on. At that point you aren't fighting them. I don't know what Tyler is thinking. Maybe this is how Stacie gets his family.

Also I think we are going to have a couple pergo sluts in the near future.

Another great chapter in the Transformations saga!

Story is developing wonderfully. I like the empowerment of Margret.

This isn't quite my favorite in the series, but it's still great! I'm excited for what happens with Emily and Tyler. It seems like Emily's mind is being slowly turned, a smoother version of the were-bimbo transformation. I would love to see stories from the point of view of the nuns and the church next!

Loving the way this story is developing. Levi is an arse, can see him being on Slutznets side in the coming war. I'm hoping (probably against hooe knowing you guys) that Emily & Tyler get a break. We need some occasional wins against the Church & I like these two. The tying together of the various story threads is going to be a mammoth chapter I suspect.

This chapter is unusual though in that, Emily & Tyler aside, there aren't really any heroes. Stacie is a grey character. She's doing the churches business but is no Gwen or Sugar Tits. How long before Maripova has to intervene here too.

On a greedy note, how long before Chp5??

Nope, not the same Amber :).

Do expect to see more of the Church soon.

Chapter 5 is almost ready - we hope to get it in the queue Thursday evening which will usually put us on the site around Sunday.

Again the world of John Lennon’s song continues to establish itself in your writing. It’s amazing and as far as I have read there remains no evil side to this story. And there truly is no brainwashing which is a negative word. Instead it’s more about building a better community for all. It’s about recognizing that expressing ones free will solely for the benefit of one’s self or one’s family is wrong and often proves to be harmful to the greater community of man. And that we need to eliminate it.

Want some real world examples, here’s a few...

“My family doesn’t believe in vaccinations” - well too damn bad because the greater community does and your shitty “family” decisions are hurting others. You don’t deserve those children, so surrender your shitty values in favor of the community good or be expelled.

“My middle eastern religious family values are important to my family, so much so that when my daughter was caught listening to rap music I ran her over with my Jeep. This honor killing saved her Eternal soul and stopped her being embarrassment on our family”

“My white American Christian family values made my wife and I send our gay son to a conversion therapy camp for two months. We were so thankful to receive the news he died at that camp praising the lord and repenting his ways”

Okay admittedly those (while real) are violently extreme examples of bad use of free will. But you do have to admit not all uses of free will results in glorious moments of joy and discovery. They are mostly about self serving actions.

In your world you are simply, safely, and (soon) openly eliminating society’s ignorant self worth and and family focused practices. Practices and traditions that have hindered the greater communities ability to grow, heal, support, and improve itself. If only you could help congress rewrite our constitution.

Loving this story!

The final chapter of Sinful Suburbia is in the queue. Suburbia is a big story, so there will be a second book coming after this one: Transformations: Return to Sinful Suburbia.

Anonymous, your comments about Imagine are very well stated, and the goal might just be the world you describe. Time will tell.

Everyone’s comments have been wonderful!

In the previous book there was a total "no homo" exchange. Will we be seeing any guy on guy action? All the ladies are bi, where are the bi dudes? I get girl on girl is incredibly sexy but so is guy on guy! ;)

Does the second book cover Doctor Love coming to the Suburbs?

That will in all likelihood happen in subsequent books - honestly, it's about whether it fits in the particular story. We certainly had male bisexuality in Soccer Mom. Transformations: Morpheus will have some strong bisexuality and transgender interludes as well. Stay tuned!

She may put in an appearance in Return to Sinful Suburbia - we know she left the farm in the same car as Mary. Her story more coincides with our book about Ithaca College coming later in the spring. Remember, a lot of our characters from the farm are at Ithaca College right now, and Dr. Love is teaching there.

Do you guys by any chance to have more images because I think it would be nice to see a lot of the before/after style images of the Transformations cast and would be very exited if it came to be.

Unfortunately, our site is down until we find another provider. As soon as it's back online, we'll put up the images from Sinful Suburbia.

I was worried about what you were doing with Tyler, fearing you would turn him into a girl like you did a while back. Is he a full whoremaster? Levi is going to get spanked at some point for going to far and then end up in the priesthood. There's no way slutznet let's Emily go to long without the shot, so if Tyler does bring the cold she'll probably day she's a willing participant and then he's screwed. But I'm still pulling for them.

Another great chapter. Not much to say but am still rooting for Emily and Tyler although with Sutznet in charge of the mansion I don't think they can win.