All Comments on 'Trapped'

Chilling.

Gybbs summed it up perfectly with just that one word. Today we're reading this as a fictional story. I wonder if that'll still be true tomorrow.

I loved the mood of the story, a bit sentimental and unsettling, but it slowly builds something more and more intriguing... I hope you will add another chapter.

The story is written well and has a nice, melancholic touch! I look forward to reading more from you, I like how in your stories, you emphasize creating an atmosphere and mystery, playing with subtle emotions, nuanced details; sometimes even the way you construct sentences influences the overall ambiance of the story. You don't focus solely on sex, but on storytelling, on something broader. I believe that's a hallmark of a talented writer!

Good, short but well written.

good, next chap

This is amazing. Hope you continue or write similar content!

nice start!

give nex chapp!

You are an excellent writer, sir!

well done,,,,made me hard,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,