by regularguy13
There are times when one must do what one must do to stay alive. This may have been a little too much but who is to say.
Another unbelievable multi-subplot story. It deserves 2 5 star reviews. Weaving three completely different stories into a famous snow storm shows writing mastery beyond compare. My guess is there probably was some fooling around in the snow storm, but nobody's talking about it. My thanks for a pleasant hour of screen time!
I've only read Hank and Haley's story, which I really liked.
However, Hank's non-reaction to Eric's assault is disappointing.
Hank...as Haley's dad...should have hunted Eric down and had a "conversation" with him. Should a baseball bat, or collapsible baton, have been involved???NNNAAAHHHHHH.....but, a couple of bars of Ivory soap knotted into a sock (which generally leaves few/no bruises...from experience!!) would have reinforced the conversation's message. Plus, word would "get around", not to mess with Haley or her girlfriends!!
Grandma and grandson...lovely coupling there!! And that grandma was willing to continue teaching him, that was very understanding and open-minded!! Grandad was cool, too!!
Five**5**Stars...definitely!! ππππππͺοΈπͺοΈπͺοΈπͺοΈπͺοΈπ―
Great story that didn't need the sexual violence! I couldn't read any more after that and want that guy's balls smashed but good...
Next time, leave a nice story, a nice story,. Ya know, for those of us that prefer them. Don't remember reading your work that left me feeling, don't want to ever read you again.
Hi.It's not an interesting story, I'm not too lazy to leave a comment.First of all, writing all three stories in one sucks.A father with a young daughter and a grandson with an old woman.These are completely different things.Different emotions.In my case, the grandson and the old woman are disgusting.Secondly, where is the intrigue? The only moment was when her father touched her nipple.But even here, her emotions at this moment did not show in any way.And in the next episode, she stupidly tells him that she wants him and sits on his cock.Is this supposed to excite the reader?Unless the reader has high intelligence (my subjective opinion).And the stories where some guys touch her daughter, as well as where she shows other guys her nipples...is this supposed to excite the reader too?It only causes disgust for her daughter sexually.In general, at the place where I magically entered my daughter and finished reading.(I am writing through a text translator)