All Comments on 'Travel Delays Ch. 04'

Apart from the fact that Allison's feelings are all over the place as in confessing love right after seeing someone first time for two years, even when you didn't love them in the first place and quickly forgetting about Andrew, it is very well written. But teenagers, right? Professing undying love at the drop off the hat. Can't see any scenario where Andrew gets to be happy and Shelby is too giving in the relationship for it to work out. Anyway little things and obviously series is still not over. Keep up the good work.

One other side note, you are way too engaged on guns, about a page's worth of info is too much for an erotica.

-tmark0099(couldn't log in)

Love the story. Only I don't like is the pregnancy... not that someone is or could be pregnant, but how it happened. Trapping him like that is wrong. It's just not right.

I stayed with it to the graduation. Then gave up reading it all together. I lost interest feeling you went from her not even mentioning Shelby on the trip to BOOM lets get married I love you. Too rushed to be believable. Every thing else was great.