All Comments on 'Treality Stories Vol. 01 Pt. 01'

Hi,

I take it that these are about you and a new girlfriend right?

Loving the promising start. You might consider making them longer and draw out the characters even more in each one.

So are you The Wizard of Oz then ... I want to visit this Wizard ...

Looking forward to Pt 2.

Hello Anonymous,

Well spotted - Stage Setting isn't going to set the erotica world on fire but …

You are my first critique - thank you …

Not sure about being the Wizard - I had a Techo who we called that as the only correlation to some fantastic high tech gear working was him being there! He and his mates loved it of course.

Sparkling Red has the Genie that makes my world rock!

Lots of Pt's to come - hope you like them and love the feedback of course. Haven't had a nasty one as yet.

Cheers

RocketmaninOz

Yes we are.

Sets the contexts for your works so well.

Big fans.

And we take it your in Australia. Great new perspectives.

You must keep telling of your Trealities. So different to the normal staples in the genres here.

Another Down Under fan