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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Provocative. Grammar and syntax clean-up would make the story rate higher, I'd say.6

RocketmaninOzRocketmaninOzabout 4 years agoAuthor

Ooohhh, I love the sound of a 6...

Somewhat of a visit with how Sparkling Red and I create these stories - but since folks are enjoying them, I will certainly spend more time on syntax and grammar then - especially if a 6 is on the cards …

Hope you have liked some of the other Stories in other Categories too …

I had gone for about 10 stories with lots of good review ratings but few comments … They are what Sparkling Red and I seek so as to improve our own Treality Story Volumes!

The first of the Volume III Treality Stories is already in the review cycle internally with your comments in mind!

Cheers from Down Under

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