All Comments on 'Tree Change Pt. 01'

Lovely story, can't wait for next charter.

Innocent wife, big-dicked, dominant neighbor with a sexy wife, and a husband who has to travel. Let the depravity begin! Cheers!

Keep it coming, I have a feeling it's going to be a good story.

Great story.

I can see plenty more episodes in this....ha ha

Good story!

5

These stories are all the same. Why couldn't Lachlan say something, anything? I'm an extreme extrovert and I'm very confrontational, I see something, I say something! I'd let Zach show his colors and then I'd knock his dick in the dirt.

I forgot to mention, "get yourself a proofreader" or buy a copy of Text Aloud and a good human voice like Jennifer and use it to write your story and listen to it and you can stop, correct your text, it may also allow you to add text or hear what doesn't sound right and delete text you don't like. An Authors Best Friend! Also, yes I do have the credentials to make such a claim.

One more thing. Your story was presented very well, thanks! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!