All Comments on 'Trick ‘n Treated'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Reasonably hot but a bit repetitive after 4 cock.

But that part killed that for me:

>He lifted his arms high enough to offer each of us a warm pit. Normally I'm not into that, but I was willing to do anything to have a shot at his cock.Jamie and I each took an arm and buried our faces in the moist hair... <

Please — give warning in tags for armpit smelling!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Halloween contest story? Not bad but too simple.

PockettRockettPockettRockettover 1 year agoAuthor

Wasn’t for the contest, just waited closer to Halloween to post.

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

Happy HOT Halloween!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

meh, your other stories are better

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Anon 11 months ago,

Nobody cares about your comment that reeks of sewage. Go get some help so you don't act like a complete arse that drops unhelpful criticism, or at least be toxic somewhere where no one gets affected by it.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

@Anon 10 days ago

Now, that's funny. I checked this story by accident and I see a response. Oh, I'm so touched. And honored. Or not.

Who's toxic? Talking about your funny late rage? :)

I didn't say anything toxic; I said the story was kinda hot, but the author could put a warning about stinky armpits. Is that unhelpful criticism? It's time for you to schedule an appointment with a doctor of head-related issues..

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Degree in Accounting somehow led to a career in Graphic Design and copywriting. Writing for school and work is leading into writing for fun. Some fiction, some real-life encounters and some a combination of both.