All Comments on 'Trick or Treat or Treat or Treat'

I normally avoid stories written in the second person but you made it work. Well done!

2nd person is hard on your reader and made this a difficult and awkward read. There is a story in there but it is buried in a poor tense choice.

This is such great fun! I know there's an editing task for anyone who wants it, though I'm just happy with the juicy story.