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All Comments on 'Trick or Treat - Pt. 01'

by WritingsInTheMoonlight

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good first story but it felt rushed and more vivid details would be nice. Good luck.

chipmonk9chipmonk96 months ago

Too short and needs more chacther building on who the chacthers are

zephyr_the_roguezephyr_the_rogue6 months ago

Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Can’t wait for part 2!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

That was fantastic hope we get part 2 soon

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I'm S.M. Luna, the storyteller who explores the entwined realms of passion and the supernatural. I'm on a mission to craft tales that ignite desire, fear, and everything in between. In my stories, consent is the cornerstone, and shared pleasure is the destination, with flair, ...