All Comments on 'Triggered by a Pink-Perfumed Letter'

Good story!

5

I am not sure I understood it at all,but it was amusing

Good story. Just decide whether Rick is Nick or not...prolly a Auto Correct issue but should be watched.

I always enjoy reading about the adventures of this author’s slightly larger than life characters, but this story had a few too many - everybody had been a star athlete etc etc

The author does get marked down for lapses in proofreading - the protagonist was “Nick” in one scene and at least one other place. My complaint is that reading “”Nick” instead of “Rick” damages the spell the author has been casting that these are real people et cetera

On my he other hand in Julia we have a woman who has great tits - all are agreed on that - and she is slim - no 38 DDs that way too many authors think is the only way to show that a woman is sexually desireable

For me your Julia is about the sexiest character I’ve met on these pages for quite a while

I always stop scrolling through the day’s new stories when this author’s latest offering appears, and today was no different Keep ‘em coming!

Totally confused

Your stories are either very good, and easy to read or not. This was not.

Firstly let me say. I enjoyed your story, the depth of decription and the vibrant characters. Thankyou for taking the time to create it.

OMG why do people commenting want to point out errors. If they were there they either weren't that noticable or you fixed them.

Your story got my votes (and time to reply).

Hey that was fun. Hopefully there will be further stories involving these characters.

What a fun tale! I always enjoy those details that bring me to a new place and teach me about a different way of life. I’m not sure about the romance, but I certainly found it humorous!

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Overall not a terrible story, but I don't feel that anyone would really talk like this, a description like that wouldn't be in a conversation unless the mother was telling the daughter why she hasn't seen Rick, not explaining to Rick why they haven't interacted. : "Rick, darling," Gwen said, the 40-year-old ignoring the employment comment that appeared to have seized the mind of her older husband. "How lovely to see you again in person after all these years since you rode at rodeos all over this region including a rodeo incorporated in our district's annual A&P (agriculture and pastoral) Show. Though we live reasonably close to each other as the crow flies, our centre of local community lies to the nor-east of here while yours on the other side of a mountain range lies to the west of where you live."

I made it through half a page when the terrible style of stilted talk got to me and I had to bow out. Rated it 2* just to register my reading and I'll try to make sure I avoid Egmont in the future.

Great start..,,,,!!!!!!!

Several more chapters are needed.

Great read, as always. Can't wait to see EG2022!!