All Comments on 'Trip with Son's Friend'

Three stars, too generous. Need help with grammar, sentence(paragraph) structure, emotional connections...

2 stars. Lots of grammar errors, no direction, paragraphs were jumbled and inconsistent.

football players don't dominate anyone. A bunch of stupid, quite literally brain-damaged idiots, that run around playing a child's game until they're too beat up to be useful to anyone ever again. A big nothingburger.

Couldn’t read it with all of incorrect grammar and constant past tense of everything. Should definitely have better editing/writing.

Sad just plain & unintelligent