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by slipperywords

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RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 14 years ago
Look forward to more

Nice, hot start.

IMcRoutIMcRoutabout 14 years ago
Nice and short

and showing potential for follow-ups, but you're getting a bit 'slippery' with the tenses. (Excuse the pun.) You should stick to the past tense and not switch to and fro with the present. It's confusing and disturbing.

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