All Comments on 'Trish's Threesome'

by wet_princess69

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robberbaronswordrobberbaronswordabout 18 years ago
Great Scene

Very good job of creating attractive, interesting characters Wet Princess. The graphic details were very stimulating and believeable. I hope you continue to follow this red-head into the club...I would like to read more about these three lovers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Big Words

You seemed to be trying to use big impressive words and a variety of different words for genitals. Very off putting, they seemed so obvious and disturbed the flow

FyreHeartFyreHeartabout 18 years ago
good story

thought your story was well written.. definately a change from what is the usual fare here.

can't wait to read more of Trish's adventures.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great story

Keep writing this is a really good story!

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