All Comments on 'Trouble'

Brilliant pacing. Very neat device to add tension!

Good. The 50 year old guy acts and speaks quite juvenile. Could have been categorized in Mature.

Sucking fucking hot, the lucky fucker. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire,UK.

That was hot. 5 Stars. Please continue.

They're the only two ppl in the room. Why do they keep saying each other's names? At one point, he said her name twice in one quote block.

If you listen to normal conversation, people don't keep saying the other person's name in conversation. I know this might seem nit-picky, but it's distracting from the story. Once I notice it, I can't stop seeing it.