by das4200
Hard not to fall in love with her. Your way of story telling does that.
Might be missing the kiss after a blowey, tasting yourself on someone is quite the aphrodisiac. Will he fuck her? Can't wait for her to fuck him. Gonna fucking split him in two!
Excellent story building.....can't wait for her to become the T-girl Top Dom in their relationship....:)
I really like this. This chapter was really good and I can't wait to see them fuck...it's gonna be hot. Also looking forward to the part where they come out to their families and their reactions.
I still find your writing and characters entertaining.
Just one point - when you finish a story set it aside for at least a day. Then do a careful reread prior to posting. I noted a couple of grammar errors.
Still good writing.