All Comments on 'True Nature Ch. 09'

So happy this story is continuing! Great chapter! ☺️

Please, don't make us wait another month for the outcome!

I hope and pray that Cain isn't too late. Also what a reveal about Fae!

Thank you for the 3rd page. Could you post Chapter 10 now?

Please keep going!!

Please please please don't keep us waiting so long

I have a feeling fae lost the baby when frank kicked him. That’s why cain can’t feel the connection. Hopefully everything turns out well

Nice twist! looking forward to the next installment

Plz updateee🥺🥺🥺

I beg you to update soon!! 🥺

Moreeer please :(

It's currently 4am and you have me pressed like a got damn panni with this damn cliffhanger. I hope to see you soon, don't leave us high and dry i beg of you

Why is this not finished :( ? So sad... Such a powerful story!

I so hoped for poor Fae to be saved... But to be honest, Fae deserve better than rapist, chicken, wreck Cain. Cain is hopless and I hate him. Fae should find someone better who could love him and take care of him, not to leave him in to the torture and abuse. Fae is just so sweet! :(

I beg you, please finish this story 😭😭

What? Why did Cain rape Fae? Are you serious? This story is such a disappointment. How can he ever be likeable character?! Disgusting.

Ok, so this comment is for the anonymous poster (and anyone else) that feels like Cain raped Fae. This absolutely did not happen. I will write some clarification when I post chapter 12 for anyone interested if they had some confusion about it. But I just want to put it on the record the NO. Cain NEVER raped Fae. So please people stop saying that about him. Yes he hurt Fae but he did not rape him. Fae wanted the sex to happen. Just differently, which is why he still begged for Cain to continue.

The suspense and what’s going to happen next is keeping me up, knowing I have to be at work in 6.5 hours!

When I tell you I SHRIEKED oh my lord

Actually screamed profanities under my breath when I read that Maxwell is Cain’s half-brother. I was giggling like a crazy person and restlessly shifting for the REST of the insane revelations, but that one STRUCK me man. I’ve been keeping up with Ice Melts When It’s Hot but only now am getting caught up with True Nature, and this chapter was lovely, even if tragic, but my brain is going !!!!!!!!!!!!! so much rn

In rereading chapters 1-7 and finally reading chapters 8 and 9, I realized that part of the reason this story feels different than other omegaverse stories is because Cain and Fae are relatively normal people. This chapter threw that idea all the way out the window! I was gonna leave a comment thoroughly dissecting your writing, about how Cain and Fae are kinky and VERY unfortunate, and are a complete subversion of omegaverse norms (smallish, virgin alpha and experienced, debauched omega), but are pretty damn ordinary compared to most omegaverse protags, but nope!! They are both royalty!! Which is also good, but I am REELING man. Fae being royalty kinda makes sense to me, but CAIN???? That guy????? Kinda kinky, a little bit of a dick, makes stupid dumbass mistakes yet has good intentions Cain???? Is royalty????? I love him anyway but What The Shit

Little note that’s probably more relevant to the last chapter than this one: I was a smidge worried I wouldn’t like Ben and thus won’t like The Only Exception when I get around to reading it, but pop off man!!! As it turns out, Cain is a fucking moron who need to be scolded and put in his place by a sweet little omega. Go Ben!!

Anyway, I don’t know if you check comments on old chapters or if Lit gives authors notifications or what, but look!!! I’m finally getting around to reading it!!!! And after gritting my teeth through chapter 8, it is just as refreshing and lovely of a read as I thought it’d be. I had to swear off literally every other writing app and website I use in order to get myself to read chapter 8 lmaoo. I’m gonna continue reading this now (I’m so damn excited you don’t even knOW), but I wanna remind you that your writing, characters, and world building are stunning!!! Not to be a stan or anything, but you’re one of my faves on Literotica so I wanted to make sure to leave a comment somewhere to remind you that your writing is amazing <3

Cain is a selfish bastard and doesn't deserve a happy ending. I normally don't think those things but it's true.