All Comments on 'Truth and Reconciliation Ch. 11'

ah.. the sister was only a couple hours behind him getting home... and she didnt arrive during any of this?? I kept waiting for her to come in the front door and catch them in the act...

@Master_Doctor The timeline, as I saw it, was something like. Arrive Home and Eat/Wait - 25Min | Entire Sexual Encounter - 30Min | IVF Talk - 5Min | That puts us at 1 hour total. Which gives Jason about 2 more hours before Evie comes in to his room (next chapter) 1 hour before she arrives home & 1 hour for her to get ready for Jason.

It's worth nothing that the average sexual encounter lasts only 7 minutes. So, 30 minutes for Janice and Jason seems about right. Regardless, don't worry, the three of them will be getting together.

Fantastic! Two new chapters at once! You're delighting me ^^ (chap 10 is i think one of my favourites so far...)

Can't wait for chapter 12! Thanks again for the usual master writing, extremely enjoyable! Cheers!

This has become very boring, I enjoy reading the stories here but this one is just a little change but basically the same thing over and over. Sister waiting and doing all that brother wants and mom that was suppose to be punished getting all the action.

@Anonymous RE: "This has become very boring"

I agree.

In my struggle to keep the story plausible I tend to take things slow. I tried to setup a scenario wherein the sister could be corrupted somewhat easily yet still be believable (within the context of this story).

However that's not how I setup the mother and now because of that it's slow going to corrupt her.

I should have planned it out much better.

I'm very busy and haven't had time to work on the story any and I'm about 80% convinced just to abandon it. The last couple chapters have gotten very few reads, so I don't think I'll be upsetting too many readers.

My next story will be better planned.

This entire story is worthless. There is NO revenge, getting even or anything really. Just a 23 yr old virgin perv coward that lets women treat him like a house pet slave!! Real friggin MEN never let themselves be treated as a tool or worse! Consequences be damned, I will not allow anyone to run me over! And anyone that lets another run them over does not deserve the least amount of respect!!!