All Comments on 'Trying Something New'

Great sec scene. Good to put all the bad karma in L/W stories to bed.

Why put the dumb 69 comment in the story? Sometimes authors are just nuts. Here you finally have a loving wife story and…. Never mind.

not knocking the story but it didn't do anything for me. But thank you for writing.

Meets Writers' Workshop criteria for good writing, so there's that positive aspect. Not much room for character development--story's too short--but you get a pretty good picture of what the two MC's are like, and unsurprisingly that the wife controls their sex life.

My only quibble is that it seems very unlikely that a couple who "had tried over the years many other directions that failed" (3rd paragraph) would only now at this point have wandered into the positive and/or negative possible reactions of the wife to rear entry in all its permutations.

Good story though. Keep writing.

MLJ

Good story!

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So, everybody has sex. so what's the point of this story? Just boring...

Not much plot or drama, but let's hope that have a long happy sexually satisfying marriage. Sounds like that will be entirely up to the wife. Maybe she has other positive features not mentioned in the story? Hope so.

Remove the dom bullshit and it’s not too bad.

Yawn. I mean, so they had sex. Happens a few billion times a day globally. So what?