All Comments on 'Trying to Deny Forbidden Love Ch. 03'

by Jadegrim3291

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WalterCieWalterCiealmost 15 years ago
You know what I like!!!

Real-l-l-ly loved the oral sex under the dress!!! But that's my thing.

Love your work, Jade. Keep it up ... you know I will!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More please

I loved reading this story & I hope you will continue with it. Please give it a happy ending.

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 15 years ago
Really good!

Quite a scene in the dress shop. I also love happy endings, but not all good stories end happily. That would certainly be an interesting concept to let your readers supply their own ending, but I think we need more of this story. Good stuff, Jade. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
wtf

what the fuck what a crappy way to end the story you should be ashamed of your self you should also be ashamed that you put the prequelat the end what a waste

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