by Saucyminx
Shit, you're an awful tease, you slut. Nice use of detail. I know Jeff must have enjoyed it as much as you did. Maybe as much as I did. Hot, hot story!
Minxy has me all hot and bothered. I either need a cold shower or a dip in your hot tub. Have room for me? Great read...thanks.
What a wonderful tease, Minxy!! Your stories are short, but they get right to the point. You prove that stories can be both short AND great! You never skip the details, and you always leave your readers wanting more in each tale you write! You could easily have a 10-chapter series for each of your tales! ;)
You packed a lot of eroticism into a relatively short story. Quite often stories this short leave me wanting, but not this one. You tell a great tale from beginning to end and I don’t feel like I have missed a thing.
Well done.
By the way; please let me know if Jeff ever decides to sell his house.
Exhibitionism holds up well over a decade. Your tight focus makes the brief tale work. This almost makes me want to create a way to view our neighbor's tub and see if they use it late at night.