All Comments on 'Turnons - A Game of Dares Ch. 02'

I only vaguely remember this story from when it was previously uploaded, but I don't remember it being this good. I'm loving the subtle slow build!

glad that you are posting again love this story

Incredible writing!

I'm sorry I don't know who you were and what you were writing before finding these two gems. Thank you

Love it! Thank you for posting!

Thanks for reading and for the feedbacks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Chapter 3 is on its way. And thanks to readers who sent me feedbacks and suggestions via email, they're always welcome.

Great example of how to build erotic tension into an exhibitionist story. Well written, and exciting to read.

Simply spectacular! Masterful even. Please continue weaving your words, you are truly gifted

This is exceptionally well written and sexy right now but I don’t think this is for me. It’s easy to see where this is going to lead, most people really don’t read the T&C’s on electronic devices and clearly this is going to take a rapid downward spiral. A case of “be careful of what you wish for”

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Fun to see that my old suggestion of daily reports from Turnons has been added to earlier chapters too in the rewrite.

You're doing an amazing job building the tension.

Thanks everyone for the additional feedbacks. I'm glad I was able to make some little fix to the original version and also be more consistent about Turnons' mechanics and features such as daily report. I'll try to do that in the following chapters as well

I´m right there with Tess.

I think a lot of the BDSM-types will gradually opt out of this story as the dares will become gradually more careless and reckless.

More great stuff. I love the tension building that you do so well. I find it hard to bother with the 5 pager stories, one or two are great, and you keep the plot marching along. As a writer myself I know how much feedback means. Excellent!