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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Interesting premise.

Sex, once it starts, moves ahead much to abruptly and too fast.

Lack of dialog during sex was not a winner.

You need to learn the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE.

Four stars.

OuietlyLookingOuietlyLooking10 months agoAuthor

Anonymous.

Thank you for my your comments. Hope you won't mind that I disagree about the speed of the sex, or that I didn't choose to describe each orgasm, and some people talk, and a lot don't during.

As for the last, YOUR and YOU'RE you are right, of course, I keep cocking that up. Not really sure why. Seems to be a blind spot.

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