All Comments on 'Tutor Pt. 01'

Best reason for the upcoming divorce you ever documented plus her son gets to spend more time with hes father and a new mom

Stopped reading as soon as I saw it was second person shit.

Loved it

-26thNC Approved

Another animal story about used up old cougars chasing young meat.

I also can't take this "you" stuff, since I did none of those things and have no desire to do them. This is riddled with so many different kinds of errors I quickly gave up.

Thank you Anonymous, I should have taken my new audience into account. Wrote it for a specific person in mind, forgot that might not translate well to other readers.

If you've written this story for someone else, then you should take great care to write a good story. This one is disrespectful!

I would give it 5 stars if he ate her pussy. A strong 4. Hot story

This is a surprisingly hot and _real_ perspective for many women, at least in their minds.

So your story, written in 2nd person from the young wife's point of view, works very well. Good storyline.

5 of 5 Stars

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