All Comments on 'Twentieth First Celebration'

by AlbertoSantos_1309

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

WOW!!!!, That was awful in si many different ways. Don't know where to start. I will say that the illustrations were cute.

Paul4playPaul4play2 months ago

Story meanders.

Could be more focused on the intimacy and the sexual adventure.

The translation does not carry well into English.

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