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All Comments on 'Twin Teleportation Gone Very Wrong'

by ThanksForAllTheFish

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Djmac1031Djmac10313 months ago

This sounds like the premise to a much longer story. You should write it 😀

Dr_GirlfriendDr_Girlfriend3 months ago

Great story. I hope you have time to develop it further soon.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Really enjoyed this one. And have to agree with Djmac1031 - this is a great premise to a longer story where the twins put themselves in ever more outrageous situations in an attempt to embarrass each other. Like a spiritual sequel to ‘May the Best Twin Win’

alohadavealohadave3 months ago

I agree with the others, I want to see more of the story and how it plays out.

KitPiscesKitPisces3 months ago

Very creative and entertaining read. Thanks for making me smile.

texlootexloo3 months ago

I found that amusing

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Thanks for reading everyone, I hope that you enjoy my stories. All comments and DMs are much appreciated, so please feel free to get in touch with any ideas or pieces of feedback you may have.