All Comments on 'Twins'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

I would of loved to seen the sisters turned into vampires insteas.

mBrowmBrowover 16 years ago
More vamps!

Agreed. We romantics would prefer seduction and turning over gore and death. But thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
maybe too quick of a death

maybe if it was more interesting, with dialogue or at least a little longer before the first sister suddenly died, it would have been better, but other than that it was awesome.

JoshuaDJoshuaDover 14 years ago
Too short

Good story but was too short.

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