All Comments on 'Twisted Twister'

by vampyre_gem

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Rushed

The idea behind the story was great but you seemed to rush into everything.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
another classic

Another Good story Vampyre_Gem. Your definately getting the hang of writing them. Different from what i normally read by you though

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
hmm.

wow. thats a disturbing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
it's its

it's = it is.

its = belonging to it.

Chiara23Chiara23over 3 years ago
Um what?

Now I've been fucked a few times and I have yet to have a man cum on my chest while I cum on his cock. I'd love to know how that particular position works for future reference! Lmao

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