All Comments on 'Two Broken Roads Ch. 03'

Loving the steady growth and development. Keep it coming.

Another great installment, Barry. 5* :)

Your build up without committing the act was excellent. Keep up the great work!

***** Very entertaining read and great storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

Loving the story. AAAA++++

WONDERFUL STORY & WRITING! Laura hasn't received an engagement ring yet, but sounds like she might want to find herself in the same shape as Sarah. Ben loves her and his new daughters with all his heart...

I am not as enthusiastic as other readers of this tale. I find the piety cloying, and the tale mostly uninteresting.

Man this story is beyond good right now and I don't want to have a bad taste later. I hope his first wife is not terminally ill or anything to leave him suddenly disguising as an affair. I for my first time in life think that affair might be a better ending than illness. There was not single appearance or proof of existence of that affair partner till this point which is why i am doubting my worst possible fear as an ending to this disney tale.

Storyline just better and better, the writing and character development are excellent. I love it when the wronged parties find their happily ever after. 5++stars

Outstanding story - very erotic progression and what’s to come. I’m not a regions person but have no problem with the religious aspect of this story. In fact, it gives it much more credibility. Instead of jumping into bed Mr Ted and Laura have taken the slow sensible route, incorporating the children into a new family. Great writing!

Sorry think I said Mr Ted meant Mr Ben!

Outstanding. Excellent. 5 Stars!!!!!!

For not having any actual sex in this chapter it sure was sexy and erotic as hell and they had way more constraint than I would have had. A lot of silly rules but it helps build the story and leads to the happy ending. Five stars *****