All Comments on 'Two for Love, Four for Lust Ch. 01'

by dchapleaux

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
No! No! No!

Never, ever write in the 2nd person. This you, you, you is a total turn off and you have immediately alienated at least half of your audience.

Don't tell me that you pinch my clit or rub my pussy. I have neither. I'm male like the majority of readers here.

dommasterjimdommasterjimabout 1 year ago

...... Incredible *5*

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