All Comments on 'Two Free Tickets Pt. 02'

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Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
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Great story, I hope there is another chapter to this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
great

hope there's another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
make a part 3

chapter 3 and 4 make it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
longer and harder

The pay off needs to be they find out they were hypnotized, yes? I think a back story on how they got the free tickets (boss, father, etc) was had the same way and nominated them both for 'reeducation' via hypno. Well written, don't go on forever, one or two more chapters expanding their hypno circle of gay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fucking awesome. Thank you for your service. 10/10

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