All Comments on 'Two Girls, One Shower'

by HotchkissRoyale

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MigbirdMigbird4 months ago

Well paced, tentative, seductively charged piece. The shower scene felt very real and what followed wonderfully erotic. First of your writing read — will sample others.

vespa69vespa694 months ago

Outstanding. Thank you. Can’t wait to read more. Would love to read a 69 scene from you.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

So hot! M + K are clearly hot for each other - I'd love to see you write more about them.

Lesbo00Lesbo00about 2 months ago

Amazing story, PLEASE write more about these two. I am invested in their love.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Loved it

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