All Comments on 'Two Guys Alone on a Boat'

by theoldercousin

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MrMac98MrMac98almost 2 years ago

Get a proof reader... far to manty word misuses!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’m pretty sure they have kissed before, so that seemed off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It’s confusing, these chapters seem to contradict or retcon previous events. This now re-established that the younger cousin wasn’t raped (or fucked) by his teammates, as he had said, but it doesn’t explain why the teammate acted like it was true. Seems like things just change to fit the narrative of each chapter rather than the longer story.

Andy_gay_boyAndy_gay_boyabout 1 year ago

Hot loved this story

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