by SpratGilfis
I love when couples can get together, and there is no drama. This was hot because it wasn't over the top!!
Fine. Happens once in a while. Usually ends in divorce. Focus on the thrill. The pain and regret will take care of themselves. Thanks for the effort.
Looks great in the short term. Almost always leads to imbalance, distrust, then divorce.
implausible, no development of intellectual side of character to complement sexual attraction.
Rewrite the story so they actually discuss and exchange partners by mutual consent and not in one room but in each other's house for a weekend and it is kissing and love and discussion. Less jealousy is aroused this way and they have something to report to each other, like how gentle they were to each other's spouse.
Not marked, as it's not my kind of thing.
Play stupid games, win stupid prizes!
i enjoyed it, liked the way the eroticism built,,,and the final consumation,,love it when couples can blend and no jealousy,,,,i believe in very close friendships whether you call it swinging,swapping, poly or open marriage,, variety is the spice of life,,try to have as much as possible.!!